Going to Milliways after voice test. Suggestions on how to improve are much appreciated.

[blankflankbuilder]

But, mun! I want to go now! If Scootaloo can go, I should definitely go. You know she's hopeless without me. And this place sounds pretty fun anyway.

*A bullhorn suddenly appears and Apple Bloom blows it loudly* Cutie Mark Crusaders Bartenders!

[Boy, Apple Bloom... You nearly made everyone here deaf. Why do I have a bad feeling about this...]

Somepony needs to be in charge around here, can't wait to get started!

Comments

[blankflankbuilder]

Nice to meet you, Darkstar. Maybe you can join the Cutie Mark Crusaders, we're all trying to find out special talent.

[mylittledarkstar]

You...you mean there are more ponies without their cutie marks?

I...I am the last one in my class.

[blankflankbuilder]

I know what you meab. I thought I was the last in my class to get their cutiemark and that's wehn I met Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo.

[mylittledarkstar]

[His short tail swishes a little.]

It is good to know I'm not the only one.