Going to Milliways after voice test. Suggestions on how to improve are much appreciated.

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But, mun! I want to go now! If Scootaloo can go, I should definitely go. You know she's hopeless without me. And this place sounds pretty fun anyway.

*A bullhorn suddenly appears and Apple Bloom blows it loudly* Cutie Mark Crusaders Bartenders!

[Boy, Apple Bloom... You nearly made everyone here deaf. Why do I have a bad feeling about this...]

Somepony needs to be in charge around here, can't wait to get started!