baedal fanfic in progress CRIT WANTED its my first time be gentle

[molotovmartinis]

deacon gazde at his lover whisperd "i luv u 5ever"
"what you mean" said fish furrowing his brow
"it mean i luv u longer than 4evr"
fish blushs but then decon say
"but if you keep stealing my smokes im gonna tear yr throat out lol"
but fish just remembers 5evr and syas "bet u u won't"
"bet u i will"
"bet u ur a skank"
"BITCH I EAT PEOPLE"

I think it has promise. Perhaps we could adapt it for stage. What about puppets? I'm thinking a Punch and Judy sort of feel. Instant classic, don't even fucking lie.

You never let me do anything.

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[molotovmartinis]

I don't know. I was thinking of branching out. There's a lot of material available.

[thedominatrix]

Oh, I see- now that you've had a taste of success, you're abandoning the fans who have been loyal to you throughout your entire career to experiment.

[...C:]

But I'll forgive you if there's sex in the next bit.

[molotovmartinis]

But I just feel like I have so much to write about you and Mycroft.

[thedominatrix]

Well, put sex in that, then. Really, dear, you act like I'm picky.

I'm a screamer, for the sake of characterisation, and if you don't write him as saying 'heavens' at least once I'll be sorely disappointed.