You mean the ones that April read out to me? They were awesome, man! [ seriously now ] As a fellow uh composer of creative um stuff? I know how important constructive criticism is for you so please remember, I say this out of love but also the wisdom of someone with an award winning album [ the award may have come from Leslie and it may have been in the form of brightly colored ribbons ] You- really like the word 'data' a lot? And like sometimes you might want to think about adding rhymes. It'll help keep your reader's attention and also keep me from falling asleep.
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[ HAN SOLO HAN SOLO HAN SOLO no ben don't be a human disaster for once. ]
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On...a specific website.
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That's fucking descriptive. What kind of "supplemental excerpts" are we even talking about here?
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Of a delicate nature.
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Ann. Hi.
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Is this going to be something I don't actually want to know?
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I'M THREAD JACKING THIS AND NO ONE CAN STOP ME
HDU!!!!!!!!
I DO WHAT I WANT X(
JERK!!!!! X(
KANYESHRUG
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algkjdsljfa
ben your life
the worst
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[ you know it. you know the ones, benny boy ]
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The ones you proofread last week.
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...does this involve Star Trek?
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Tangenitally, yes.
[ why ]
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did someone say Star Trek?]Supplemental excerpts? You a cadet, son?
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I'm a campaign consultant. Not...no, not a cadet.
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[ there's the air of someone who has clearly said this a thousand times before. ]
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[ no ben, we all know you don't ask why. ]
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[ beaming. he did good right? right? ]
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April read them-- [ no, on second thought he isn't surprised. ] Data's one of the characters but I'll...try to add rhymes.
[ next chapter: suddenly rhymes ]
Thanks. For the feedback.