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Rin Matsuoka ([personal profile] openturn) wrote in [community profile] dear_mun2013-08-28 04:32 pm

spoilers for ep. 8!! (canon: Free! Iwatobi Swim Club)

I'm not jealous. That was a legitimate critique -- the butterfly isn't meant to look like that. The recovery was all wrong, for one. And only beginners need to pull so far above the waterline to take breaths.

[ hey... it's okay to be jealous, you know -- ]

More like I want compensation for being forced to watch that.

[ you weren't forced, though... ]
beautifail: (Default)

failing beautifully, you mean

[personal profile] beautifail 2013-08-29 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
[Maybe. But at least he doesn't have ugly shark teeth. So, so not beautiful.]

Ah, it's true I've only begun swimming a short while ago, but... [Lowering his head a bit here because, wow, he knows he's still not good enough, bu he was hoping it wasn't that obvious, at least.] But I will definitely work hard to keep improving, for the sake of my teammates! So I... I really appreciate your honesty, Matsuoka-senpai!

[Determined shounen nod!!! Because, you know, EVEN THOUGH IT HURTS TO KNOW HE'S AN UGLY FAILURE, he really does sincerely appreciate the (vague) pointers. He can use them to figure out what areas need to be worked on.]
beautifail: (what you don't believe me?)

that's because rei is me, i am rei

[personal profile] beautifail 2013-08-29 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
[Ever tried braces?? Surgery??]

No, I don't think they did... [Because, yeah, they all have different styles but maybe they were just worried that Rei would finally drown for real so they neglected to teach him that for the sake of keeping him alive. ANYWAY. THIS IS IMPORTANT INFORMATION AND HE SHOULD BE TAKING NOTES OR SOMETHING and then if he tries it out unsupervised again and drowns for real it's all going to be Rin's fault.] But if it can give me even a millisecond's advantage, I'll definitely keep it in mind next time!

[And then it kind of hits him:] Ah... Matsuoka-senpai, if you don't mind my asking... Was the butterfly style your specialty back then?

['Back then' being the Past that all you guys seem to have together and that he has no idea of because wow you people are rude and don't tell the newbie anything.]
beautifail: (oops forgot my glasses tho)

I AM JUST A BIT BIASED but this is true

[personal profile] beautifail 2013-08-29 03:55 am (UTC)(link)
[He has blood-colored hair, this is enough!!]

Ah--! [... well, um. This is awkward. He kind of feels like he's taken up Rin's place in the team now. Even if it was kind of Rin's fault, but uh. Uhhhhhh. WOW HOW DO WE WORDS. (Also, nope, not for Rei, this is drowning anime for Rei!)]

I suppose I... really still have a long way to go, then. [To be on the same level as all of you guys, that is. And now he feels even worse about lagging behind and disappointing his teammates and omg Rin probably did a much better job even as a kid and aaaaaaahh!!! aka he will never be as awesome as senpai]