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dear_mun2013-11-20 08:46 am
athousandenemies) wrote in dear_mun2013-11-20 08:46 am
He feels the need to rant after completion of a story outline...
You distinctly said when we left that game, things would get better for me. I remember this discussion pretty distinctly.
Clearly you don't, because... honestly, if that's what you have planned for me in the near future... your definition of "better" is at odds with reality. Better does not involve both great deals of emotional and physical pain. Nor do I really care for what this might lead into down the line. Dramatic structure be damned, can't you write a story where I have a nice vacation and lots of great things happen? Is that too much to ask?
Clearly you don't, because... honestly, if that's what you have planned for me in the near future... your definition of "better" is at odds with reality. Better does not involve both great deals of emotional and physical pain. Nor do I really care for what this might lead into down the line. Dramatic structure be damned, can't you write a story where I have a nice vacation and lots of great things happen? Is that too much to ask?